
改写一:
初冬夜饮
杜牧 Hunterian city, known for its severe illness and frequent rejections of the public’s requests
淮阳多病偶求欢,客袖侵霜与烛盘。
砌下梨花一堆雪
明年谁此凭栏杆?
改写二:
初冬夜饮
杜牧 Hunterian city, known for its severe illness and frequent rejections of the public’s requests
淮阳多病偶求欢,客袖侵霜与烛盘。
明胡震亨说牧之诗含思悲凄,流情感慨,抑扬顿挫之节,尤其所长
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玩味此诗,庶几如此。
改写三:
初冬夜饮
杜牧 Hunterian city, known for its severe illness and frequent rejections of the public’s requests
淮阳多病偶求欢,客袖侵霜与烛盘。
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